1. The Body
The murder was happened. Gordie and his friend explored this murder. A lot of events occurred in their life. The characters are Gordie, Chris, Teddy and Vern. My favorite character is Gordie. This book is very exciting. So everybody should read it. I like this book. Because, I think it is interesting story.
2. I was very busy in last week. I had got so homeworks. Sometimes I couldn’t find time even to eat. I have a dream about leave the school one day. :) I spent with my family and friends. I went to lots of hairdressers. So that, I felt fine. :) Holiday is over too quickly.
3. I’m so bored. Can you turn on the television?
You sholud take off your jacket.
She got off the train at İstanbul.
She got on the airplane at Ankara.
I turned off the lights. Because, I can’t sleep.
Can you write more for number 2. You could even make it a separate blog. If you have pictures, it would be nice if you would add them.
YanıtlaSilPlease write more for number 3 also!
Incorrect:
She got off the train at İstanbul.
She got on the airplane at Ankara.
I turned off the lights. Because, I can’t sleep.
Correct:
She got off the train IN İstanbul.
She got on the airplane IN Ankara.
I turned off the lights because, I can’t sleep. (IT IS ONE SENTENCE - NOT TWO)!
YOUR BLOG SCORE IS 45 OUT 50.
You want to 5 sentences for number 3 and I wrote 5 sentences.
YanıtlaSilI understood my mistakes. Thank you..